How does my resume look? Feedback appreciated?

I’ve crossed out personal info, but the important things are there. I’d appreciate any feedback about my resume and how I could improve it. Thank you so much!
This has been copied and pasted from Word, so please don’t think this is how it’s formatted on paper.
XXXXXX X. XXXXXXX
2222 XXX, XXXXXXXXXX, ST, 55555
XXX-XXX-XXXX
xxxxxx@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.com
OBJECTIVE
To obtain a position [...]

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need your feedback on my resume?

Mr. XX
xxx Eglinton Ave.W. #999, Toronto, Ont.
Phone: (xxx) xxx-xxxx
Email: xxxx@yahoo.ca
Objective: To obtain a Marketing / Project Coordinator position within a progressive company that offers friendly environment with opportunities for growth and professional development.
Profile:
•Over 8 years of marketing and communication experience managing many projects worth over a quarter of million dollars per annual.
•Prepared and managed the [...]

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How often should I send my network a reminder to ask them for help with job leads, without sounding desperate?

I am contacting people in my network, who are in my field to look for a job or job lead, I always send them an email with my resume and kind of jobs I am looking for, but they hardly respond back to me ( i believe everyone is busy), How often is it Okay [...]

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Can you Pleeease critique my Cover Letter?. Please.I need a job?

I am in search of a career in Public Relations or Client Service and maintenace…. Is this cover letter going to get me that job…. also if anyone live in the NYC or North Jersey area and can assist with getting me a job… Wow… I would greatly appreciate… here it is
I’m writing to express [...]

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Can you Pleeease critique my Cover Letter?. Please.I need a job?

I am in search of a career in Public Relations or Client Service and maintenace…. Is this cover letter going to get me that job…. also if anyone live in the NYC or North Jersey area and can assist with getting me a job… Wow… I would greatly appreciate… here it is
I’m writing to express [...]

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What changes should I make to my Resume?

(i removed the Header with my name, address, email, etc.)
Objective: To begin a career path in software development, writing or mathematics. I am willing to travel or relocate. I am also willing to pursue an alternative career path.
Summary:
·Bachelors of Science in Computer Science – Indiana State University
May, 2006.
·Proficient in Java, C++, Visual Basic, Assembly Language, [...]

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hi, can someone proof read my coverletter?

Kim
address 1
address 2
adress 4
March 20, 2009
Dear XXXXX:
It was with great interest that I reviewed the Divisional Sales Manager position with Company ABC. I am confident that my work experience combined with my education makes me an excellent candidate for this position.
Over the course of my working experience, I have developed excellent presentation [...]

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Work related: What should I do?

Currently, I love my job. It’s for a small company (fewer than 50 people in 2 offices), and it’s exactly what I love to do.
I work in the marketing department, meaning all 3 of us (the designer, the web master and communications specialist) have to get our work edited and approved by our lead/manger [...]

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